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Good Omen From Monsoon

Comes monsoon in its crystal tassels, Drizzling on my stain-glass window Effervescent as nimbus' Marian beads Floating within my liquid stream of prayer, To heal this soul from godly intercession. Contest of Sara Kendrick: Let's Do Some Alphabet 10/3/2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2017 3:55:00 PM

Glorious :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Maria Williams

Date: 10/4/2017 6:14:00 AM

Heavenly write, Nette, good luck in the contest...Maria xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 5:26:00 AM

This is soooo wondrous and heavenly I really loved reading it this morning my friend! You have a way to bring out quality emotions from your poetry, I love that! I wish I could bring out your kind of emotion sometimes! I have my style, and you have yours, but sometimes I envy yours so much! I absolutely loved the line, "Drizzling on my stain-glass window" What a delightful piece, Great work!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/3/2017 11:44:00 AM

Excellently done my dear lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl

Leon Datu

Date: 10/2/2017 6:08:00 PM

Nature has a way of sending signs that answered prayers are on their way. You view life from an extraordinary perspective, thus, creating outstanding poems.

Amelie Mara

Date: 10/2/2017 4:57:00 PM

Well woven in a glorious way as you put together the coming of monsoon, stain-glass window, Marian beads; all leading to a prayer which reflects blessing through intercession.A tough act to follow; your poetry is definitely a publisher's ideal!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/2/2017 4:28:00 PM

Monsoon brings good omen through your lovely ABC creation!