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Good Omen From Monsoon

Comes  monsoon  in  its crystal tassels,

Drizzling on my stain-glass window

Effervescent as  nimbus'  Marian beads

Floating  within my liquid stream of  prayer,

To heal this soul    from godly intercession.



Contest of Sara Kendrick: Let's Do Some Alphabet
10/3/2017

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Eve Roper

October 5, 2017 at 3:55 PM

Glorious :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Maria Williams

October 4, 2017 at 6:14 AM

Heavenly write, Nette, good luck in the contest...Maria xxx

Russell Sivey

October 4, 2017 at 5:26 AM

This is soooo wondrous and heavenly I really loved reading it this morning my friend! You have a way to bring out quality emotions from your poetry, I love that! I wish I could bring out your kind of emotion sometimes! I have my style, and you have yours, but sometimes I envy yours so much! I absolutely loved the line, "Drizzling on my stain-glass window" What a delightful piece, Great work!!

Bl Devnath

October 3, 2017 at 11:44 AM

Excellently done my dear lovely friend. Good luck. Loved always, bl

Leon Datu

October 2, 2017 at 6:08 PM

Nature has a way of sending signs that answered prayers are on their way. You view life from an extraordinary perspective, thus, creating outstanding poems.

Amelie Mara

October 2, 2017 at 4:57 PM

Well woven in a glorious way as you put together the coming of monsoon, stain-glass window, Marian beads; all leading to a prayer which reflects blessing through intercession.A tough act to follow; your poetry is definitely a publisher's ideal!