Good night and good bye

Good night.
After 45 x 365 nights, I just realised.
They were only my dreams.
They lasted so long I do not remember what they meant.
Whatever they were, they have gone forever.
I do not want them to come back and give me heartache.
I either we took it or left it.
There was no but about it.
Why did not you lightly make the promises,
And cruelly you decided to break it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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January 20, 2025 at 10:55 PM
Tough one. The poem is well spoken but the end is hard.
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