Sarai Virden Poet Quatrain

Good Night

The day slips into rayless sky
And the busy of day finds it's end
Before I rest these tuckered eyes
There's a message I need to send

You've made my day fortuitous 
In unexpected ways
For merely just my thoughts of you
Crafted smiles that lighted my face

Could it be we're that in tune
You mimic familiar routine
To think of me as night resumes
Saying good night dear one sweet dreams

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Mark Peterson November 28, 2013 at 8:24 PM Such a precious note. I'd sit in tearful smile were I to receive it and then commit it to my box of memories to treasure always. If there were more people like you, this old world could cease its revolutions, the experiment complete. Sarai Virden November 29, 2013 at 1:23 AM Oh Mark, my friend... Consider yourself a recipient :-) So precious was your comment I sat there with my eyes watering yet stunned by your kindness all at the same time. You humble me.

Chuck Melugin November 28, 2013 at 12:39 PM Sarai This is special! Sarai Virden November 28, 2013 at 5:03 PM I so appreciate you stopping by and your kind comment. Glad to make a new friend, looking forward to reading yours as well.

Liam Mcdaid November 28, 2013 at 10:29 AM deep touching beautiful piece Sarai Virden November 28, 2013 at 5:00 PM Many many thanks dear Liam... Not enough poems for The things we say every day. Hope your having a wonderful Thanksgiving.

Sandra Adams November 28, 2013 at 8:21 AM such a beautiful poem you have written, I think we all linger in the thoughts of a special someone....lovely write from your heart! :) Sarai Virden November 28, 2013 at 4:56 PM Thank you dear Sandra, I hope you are enjoying a wonderful Thanksgiving. I know I am thankful for you.

Poet Tacito November 27, 2013 at 11:35 AM This is very deep & touching. Your heart shines strong. Excellent. Sarai Virden November 27, 2013 at 11:54 AM Once again your comments reach far and wide like hugs from a friend that know no miles, many many thanks Sir Drake

Jack Ellison November 27, 2013 at 10:52 AM Awww I didn't realize how much you loved me sweet Sarai!!! LOL So nice of you to put it in the words of a poem so now everyone KNOWS! Funny old geezer eh!!! Love ya Sarai! xoxoxox Sarai Virden November 27, 2013 at 11:29 AM Good morning sweetie, the love just flows when it comes to you... Hope your beginning to be surrounded by all the pretty ladies, oh and family and friends too for Thanksgiving. Enjoy Jack, I'll be sharing your poems with my brood. Hugs galore xoxox