Good night 2

Great night to sleep tight
Onyx sky looking at stars
Owls hoot a piercing cry
Did he just call sweetheart 

Now I lay me down to sleep
I pray that I wake up
Good night poet or good morning 
Hope you get plenty love
Tootles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Suri Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:31 PM
the "Did he just call sweetheart" actually hit me. won't go into detail, but life has seemed a bit unreal, and that line summarizes it. its crazy how your poem can mean different things to different people.
Jones Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Agree! Cool beans! Thanks for sharing Reya!
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:38 PM
so sweet. Well, can only say right now, Good day!
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 2:09 PM
Good day sweetie!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 5:35 AM
lol…did he just call sweetheart…tootles ;)
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 8:59 AM
:0)
Edmonds  Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 1:37 AM
Goodnight Karen, tootle do… Beryl
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Salutations Beryl! :0) I didn’t see this until morning.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:32 PM
So cute, so sweet. Glad for the change in mood. I hope you have a lovely day.
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:50 AM
The other moody poems are for contest Victor. lol Thanks for reading and have a fabulous day as well!
Greenhough Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 10:03 PM
This is an imaginative acrostic. Tootles is for goodnight? It sounds familiar. Pleasant poem.
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 12:49 AM
Yes tootles for goodnight :) So glad you like it!
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