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Good Morning Doctor Death

Waking up five in the morning, and looking the dawn's sun rise, to start the day with a yawn and strech. Smell the morning dew, as you go and retrive the morning newspaper, filled with tablots of lives more intresting than yours. You wave to your hand to your neighbor, who you don't like, still you say, "hi" Why? It's just the nature of the human being. You turn and go inside, you feel some pain on your leftside. All those milkshakes and hamburgers caught up to you. What do you do? Not much, you can do now, You fall to the ground, clenching your chest; you call out for help, but no one comes. You see your neightbor, but he doesn't mind. See he hated you as well, like you hated him, and he is glad to see you fall to your knees and beg for Mercy. Oh no! here he comes, Doctor Death, no not Jack Kavorkian, No! the big cheese, the Creature that prays on black souls, just like yours. Doctor Death come on down! Come and clam your prize! Good morning Doctor Death! I'm ready, Are you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/8/2013 5:37:00 PM
Looks like some changes are in order. I can certainly relate to too many bad food choices and I don't really know any neighbors except one... very creative :)
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:25:00 PM
- No, not ready yet .... want to see many beautiful sunrise and sunset yet ... time will come when it comes .... A "different" poem from you Christopher, like it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:15:00 PM
Not ready yet..Hopefully He can spare me this time : ).Enjoyed your creative poem dear friend
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Chris Boskovski
Date: 9/7/2013 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Charma for reading my poem! love and hugs all around.

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