Good Morning

Sunrise on your face, Morning in your tired voice, And dawn in your hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 2:05 PM
You keep coming up with these little Gems Rollo. Love em xx
West Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Hi Mandy, thank you so much for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 11:07 PM
You covered a lot of time in three short lines Rollo. Well done. You are the master of the three line poems my friend. Merry Christmas Rollo
West Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 1:32 PM
Hello Richard, thank you so much my friend for stopping by and the great compliment. Rollo
Komala Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 10:09 PM
thank you Rollo for sharing you wonderful work... enjoyed your sharing this morning..:) have a blessed day <3 SK
West Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Hello SK, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Liwayway Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 8:22 PM
awesome write friend Rollo. Have a blessed Christmas to you and to your family :)
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Hello Maria, thank you dear friend for stopping by and commenting on my work. Rollo
A   Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 7:57 PM
love the image,, any shining look seems to have slept good.. enjoyed...PD
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 8:23 PM
Hi PD, thanks for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
Harrell Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 3:17 PM
You write the best love poems, Rollo. I love it. Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and an awesome New Year, dear friend. Love ya, Toquyen
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Hi Toquyen, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
La France Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Rollo, a very nice Senryu, enjoyed reading it today. Constance
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Hi Constance, thank you so much for stopping by and reading my Senryu. Rollo
Sivey Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 6:31 AM
This is a very special write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and wondrous poem this morning! I love how you brought the morning hours all over her, I know what it's like to wake up like that! This is a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
West Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 11:18 AM
Hello my friend and thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo
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