Good Morning

As the morning sun illuminates my face, 
And the birds sing joyous songs of the new day, 
I turn over and slowly open my eyes, 
Staring at the empty spot where you used to lay. 

Renewed is the pain that sleep had pushed aside, 
Renewed is the longing of a broken heart, 
Renewed are the sad memories of the day, 
When you packed up and left me, for a brand new start. 

As the warm water cascades down my body, 
And washes away the dried up tears of a lonely night, 
I close my eyes and dream of cleansing my soul, 
Of selfish misery now basking in the limelight. 

My reflection serves as a portrait of despair, 
A painful reminder of the happiness that was once there. 
Each piece of clothing a sadder memory than the last, 
They are weighed down by more regret than I can bare. 

Before I open the door I straighten my back, 
Raise my chin and paint a smile on my face. 
In one hand I clutch my crying soul, 
And shove it in my heart's padlocked case. 
I turn the knob and look out in the distance, 
To a blissful, sublime, nonexistent place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/7/2013 10:08:00 PM
Aaaahhhmmmaaazzziiinnng!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/14/2012 2:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Mest xx
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Leonora's "Waking Up" contest Mest. Love, Carol
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Mest Kiphen
Date: 12/13/2012 6:09:00 PM
Thank you!!! :)
Date: 12/12/2012 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend, Mest! Thank you so much for your full support! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/13/2012 6:09:00 PM
Thank you!!! :)
Date: 12/2/2012 1:47:00 PM
Welcome to Soup Mest I look forward to reading more of your work. I am running a contest for 6 lines I would love to have the last 6 lines of this entered & if you are not a premium member please leave me a note at the bottom of the verse. [I would like to highlight some new members] Light & Love
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Mest Kiphen
Date: 12/13/2012 6:09:00 PM
Do I need to make it a separate poem then?
Date: 11/29/2012 5:36:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Mest. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. I am sorry it is so belated. Love, Carol
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