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Good Morning

Birds sing their waking
Silence dead and gone
Aurora rays pierce the sky
Resurrected dawn
Sunlight drips to your lashes
Slides down to your nose
Your eyes glow in the early light
like a morning rose.

Copyright © Alyssa Finley | Year Posted 2008

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Raul Moreno Date: 5/3/2009 1:54:00 PM Alyssa, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 4/27/2009 3:47:00 PM From a feature of the week (3/15) to a "first round survivor" ... smile ... great job, Alyssa. Congratulations and good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/10/2009 5:32:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Alyssa. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 4/4/2009 9:53:00 PM congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/1/2009 7:58:00 PM Dear Heart! I am so happy to see this wonderful poem in the Semi-finals. Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 3/30/2009 3:11:00 PM Congratulations on making it through and best wishes for the final round. Well done. Love Heidie Login to Reply

Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/19/2009 10:01:00 AM Congratulations Alyssa on your lyric "Good Morning" being featured. God Bless. Vince Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 3/17/2009 3:57:00 PM Very nicely said what a quiet reflection, Congratulations on your lovely featured poem! Laura :) Login to Reply

Robin Maughan Date: 3/17/2009 11:20:00 AM Awesome!!Congrats on your feature!! Poetry is such wonderful therapy!! Great write, Love, Robin Login to Reply

Trudy Diane Rider Date: 3/17/2009 9:51:00 AM Wonderful poem! Love the imagery! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~ Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 3/16/2009 5:36:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar Login to Reply

Lena Townsend Date: 3/16/2009 5:24:00 PM "Aurora rays pierce the sky"- absolutely beautiful! Congratulations on being featured this week with this wonderful write. You are so gifted, the imagery here is spectacular! Smiles from Lolita(btw, thank you for your kind comments on my writing I am honored) Login to Reply

C. E. Mcmullin Date: 3/16/2009 5:07:00 PM Congrates on the featured write this week, and one for my favorites file. I love the imagery and the way it flows along to a warm conclusion; Well done, Alyssa- poet butterfly Login to Reply

Date: 3/15/2009 4:16:00 PM What a beautiful reflection! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 3/15/2009 12:54:00 PM Beautiful write here, Alyssa and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 12/17/2008 3:59:00 AM Dear Alyssa, You have etched this beautiful, tender moment in time forever in my mind. Elaine Login to Reply

Derrick Burton Date: 12/1/2008 11:02:00 PM beautiful poem and well written, thank you for sharing. Login to Reply

Christopher Higgins Date: 11/27/2008 5:12:00 PM Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply

Alyssa Finley Date: 11/26/2008 8:32:00 AM "his" face, more like... Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 11/26/2008 7:41:00 AM What a beautiful little poem. This is so sweet, and I can picture the sunlight coming down over her face. Just lovely! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 11/26/2008 2:05:00 AM Beautiful!:)--"Hello Precious & Gifted Alyssa Finley!"--How are you young lady? Well I hope! What a very pretty & lovely write that you put together here dear~Filled with a lot of the tenderness of your heart & soul I do believe~Smile, I loved it!--So,"You Have A Very Beautiful Day Today, And Love To All You Love, John!"~Bye Young Lady:) Login to Reply