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Good Morning

Birds sing their waking
Silence dead and gone
Aurora rays pierce the sky
Resurrected dawn
Sunlight drips to your lashes
Slides down to your nose
Your eyes glow in the early light
like a morning rose.

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Raul Moreno

May 3, 2009 at 1:54 PM

Alyssa, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

April 27, 2009 at 3:47 PM

From a feature of the week (3/15) to a "first round survivor" ... smile ... great job, Alyssa. Congratulations and good luck in the contest!

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 10, 2009 at 5:32 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Alyssa. Love, Carol

Adeleke Adeite

April 4, 2009 at 9:53 PM

congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke

Elaine George

April 1, 2009 at 7:58 PM

Dear Heart! I am so happy to see this wonderful poem in the Semi-finals. Best wishes to you in the final round. Lainie

Heidie Buys

March 30, 2009 at 3:11 PM

Congratulations on making it through and best wishes for the final round. Well done. Love Heidie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 19, 2009 at 10:01 AM

Congratulations Alyssa on your lyric "Good Morning" being featured. God Bless. Vince

Laura Mckenzie

March 17, 2009 at 3:57 PM

Very nicely said what a quiet reflection, Congratulations on your lovely featured poem! Laura :)

Robin Maughan

March 17, 2009 at 11:20 AM

Awesome!!Congrats on your feature!! Poetry is such wonderful therapy!! Great write, Love, Robin

Trudy Diane Rider

March 17, 2009 at 9:51 AM

Wonderful poem! Love the imagery! Congratulations on being featured! ~Trudy~

Sharon Winter

March 16, 2009 at 5:36 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

March 16, 2009 at 5:24 PM

"Aurora rays pierce the sky"- absolutely beautiful! Congratulations on being featured this week with this wonderful write. You are so gifted, the imagery here is spectacular! Smiles from Lolita(btw, thank you for your kind comments on my writing I am honored)

C. E. Mcmullin

March 16, 2009 at 5:07 PM

Congrates on the featured write this week, and one for my favorites file. I love the imagery and the way it flows along to a warm conclusion; Well done, Alyssa- poet butterfly

March 15, 2009 at 4:16 PM

What a beautiful reflection! Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen

Sue Mason

March 15, 2009 at 12:54 PM

Beautiful write here, Alyssa and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations!

Elaine George

December 17, 2008 at 3:59 AM

Dear Alyssa, You have etched this beautiful, tender moment in time forever in my mind. Elaine

Derrick Burton

December 1, 2008 at 11:02 PM

beautiful poem and well written, thank you for sharing.

Christopher Higgins

November 27, 2008 at 5:12 PM

Very beautiful poem. Enjoyed the read.

Alyssa Finley

November 26, 2008 at 8:32 AM

"his" face, more like...

Carrie Richards

November 26, 2008 at 7:41 AM

What a beautiful little poem. This is so sweet, and I can picture the sunlight coming down over her face. Just lovely! ~ Carrie

John Rhinem

November 26, 2008 at 2:05 AM

Beautiful!:)--"Hello Precious & Gifted Alyssa Finley!"--How are you young lady? Well I hope! What a very pretty & lovely write that you put together here dear~Filled with a lot of the tenderness of your heart & soul I do believe~Smile, I loved it!--So,"You Have A Very Beautiful Day Today, And Love To All You Love, John!"~Bye Young Lady:)

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