Good Morning

The light	
A silent yet vibrant call
As if a shout from the east
Upon the wake of the day
The round surfacing presence
Calls upon us all
To stop, take notice
Pay heed
As we rub our eyes
And stretch to
The welcoming sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 25, 2008 at 8:12 AM
REALLY NICE USE OF LANGUAGE...I ESPECIALLY LIKE ''upon the wake of the day' this is a delightful little gem Michael ..ps thankyou for your suggestion re my BABY and your kind comments
Reynolds Avatar
September 25, 2008 at 3:53 AM
An awesome, breathtaking way to start a cool, autumn morn. very beautiful poem, Michael, love Kristin
Richards Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 8:01 AM
Such a nice way to start the day! Thank you! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
September 24, 2008 at 5:41 AM
What a very beautiful good morning! Lovely way to greet the day in reading this poem. Makes me feel this new day holds unlimited possibilities. Have a great one! Love, Shar
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September 24, 2008 at 5:32 AM
God morning Michael, you have painted a very beautiful portrait of greeting the morning anew. Thank you for sharing the beauty of this morning with us all. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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