Good Morning, Good Morning

I hear a little greeting at least once every day. “Good morning. Good morning,” both friends and strangers say. And when I’ve been awakened and turn the TV on, news folks have been saying it now since the break of dawn. How fitting the expression (that the dawn is breaking). Dawn sure breaks my restful sleep as I lie there aching.. . . Aching to go back to my private land of dreams, to burrow under blankets. Instead, it always seems. . . I’ve barely laid my head upon my pillow when my clock’s alarm starts buzzing. I turn it off and then. . . I quickly dress for work with barely time to eat. Dashing to my car, I hear the birdies’ “Tweet, tweet, tweet.” I know what they are saying to all the other birds. Those crazy birds are saying it not even using words! “Good morning. Good morning.” And merrily the sun beams down as I go speeding to work again. What fun! To bed, to rise, and early! To do those things I should, But I will not. . . and so my mornings never will be good! For Frank's "What Annoys you" and now for PD's Contest on Poems written in the a.m.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/15/2014 10:59:00 PM
Andrea This is a fun and whimsical write that makes the reader smile and chuckle. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Block Party poem.
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Date: 3/16/2013 12:18:00 PM
Andrew.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD
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Date: 3/14/2013 4:28:00 PM
Great great win Andrea....:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 3/14/2013 10:13:00 AM
While Dad hated the Beatles, we loved to sing their early songs and chunk rocks at road signs from the back of his truck. You could get by with that sort of thing in the country. Thanks for taking me back! RAY
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Date: 3/14/2013 3:49:00 AM
I thought you didn't normally write sweet poems, but you sure can do 'tweet, tweet' poems. Sometimes morning is a heartache, serenaded by our little feathered friends. Cheers!
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Date: 3/13/2013 9:35:00 PM
Beautiful write,Andrea. Congratulations on a super win! I know just how you feel! : ) Luv, Annalise
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Date: 3/13/2013 6:03:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea...
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Date: 3/13/2013 2:41:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your win, very uplifting indeed...David
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Date: 3/13/2013 2:32:00 PM
Such a great way to start the day!! You have cheered up every morning with a bright and happy poem! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 3/13/2013 12:40:00 PM
I was not at all surprised to see your name on my winners list! :) I have felt this way SO many times in the morning. I especially loved your clever verse about the birds. Congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:57:00 AM
It is those darn crows at 4 in the morning that drive me nuts. I can tune the others out. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 8/14/2012 2:34:00 PM
I love how the birds do it without using words. Except the crows. When they say it, it's absurd. Maybe you should go to bed a little sooner. Then 5:00 will maybe feel like a nooner. :) Have a lovely day.
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Date: 8/14/2012 6:10:00 PM
to the last part of your message for me. . . NOT hahaha
Date: 8/14/2012 4:22:00 AM
an insight in one's morning, love this.
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Date: 8/13/2012 10:57:00 AM
very cute! I would do this contest but...anyway, I really love that 3rd verse - the humor in it is great. I can totally relate! and tweeting birds, they can be magical or annoying as hades! lol :) btw, good morning to you ;)
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:33:00 AM
I guess I'm lucky, because I have to get up three or four times in the night - then, bliss, I can go back to sleep and dream some more. This one is so true, dear. You want to take all the good mornings and.....well. Love, daver
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:14:00 AM
This reads like a winner to me. Good luck for the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 8/12/2012 7:59:00 AM
Andrea for some odd reason this one made me smile because I could just picture you going through the motions in the morning.. All the best for Francine's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 8/12/2012 7:26:00 AM
You must be a night person Andrea, those mornings thatcome too soon are aptly given recognition here and I sympathize with your lethargy.Love, Lizzie
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Date: 8/12/2012 7:05:00 AM
simply stunning, andie! ...this poem cheers me up and makes me sigh!.. good morning!...:) huggs!
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Date: 8/12/2012 5:59:00 AM
Andrea you know I can see you dashing for the car and listening to the birds, I like it good luck..David
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Date: 8/11/2012 9:00:00 PM
A very entertaining write. Hmm. I take it you are not a morning person? LOL Best wishes for the contest, Andrea. Love, Kim
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:58:00 PM
wow! Andrea,,,my mornings are always the best.... it's the noon time i loath.... sorry about your back, and so on and so,on.... good luck in the contest...pd
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:17:00 PM
i get up early when my husband is home and sleep late when he is gone. not really a morning person as i get older
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Date: 8/11/2012 1:42:00 PM
lol, I know exactly how you feel, my friend - loved this witty write. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 8/11/2012 11:24:00 AM
this was a wonderful write.. Good luck in the contest my friend and thanks for your kind comments.. Soup Mail Cory
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