Good Friday Blues

Good Friday be with you all A once in a year Friday Christ has been crucified Every year for two thousand years He doesn’t complain at all Today is a day to fast for believers Jesus sacrificed his flesh for us It’s not proper to eat fresh meat today So, I’ll leave the leftovers in the fridge Just as Christ was hungry on the cross Can I drink on Good Friday? Are hard spirits ok, Holy Spirit? He hung there on the cross thirsty Three hours like holy smoked meat At high noon the sun eclipsed As the light returned and He cried The earth shook in mourning A soldier pierced his side Blood and wine pour out The Roman said the meat was done Where was he for three days? Was he with the Easter Bunny? No one knows but God The shell of a cracked man Was placed in Joseph’s tomb A meat in a slow cooker for three days Then the boulder rolled away Like an Easter egg down the hill Then Christ rose from the dead For 40 days He was with us Our disbelief was our shame He showed us how to die On the Feast of Ascension He left us alone once more As he rose to be with Father He cried thrice more His Chuch fell apart years later So, I drink strong spirits On this Good Friday To unify my body with Christ’s On the darkest of all Fridays Till Sunday when He wakes He’ll find a chocolate bunny crowned King of Consumption Give us Barabbas

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Date: 3/29/2024 11:52:00 PM
For a person who Isnt Christian, this gives me an idea of what good friday is for you and how you also fast during that day. Very insightful and sincere poem that depicts your faith in such a seamless manner. Hope easter celebrations went well and good friday to you as well. Sending you light
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Date: 3/30/2024 12:16:00 AM
Thank you. I don't know if I'm Christian; only God knows. I'm more like Peter who denied Christ three times. Shame is a wise teacher. I'll admit that I broke my fast though spirits are questionable. Humbled by your read.
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