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Good Friday

Event that happened long ago, The departure of a rainbow; Because it had adorned the sky, More than anyone could comply...! He was pigeon among eagles, Many played the roles of seagulls; His preaching pricked their hardened sculls, They soon turned like pins and needles...! A deer have a say before lions? A lamb standing in defiance? In a land known for tit-for-tat, Who would dare to bell the hate cat? By slaughtering the lamb they thought: Good lesson to rebels is taught; Though the lamb went through much blood-shed, No fur of his glory got shred...! This is, hence, Good Friday is good, Goodness embraced the cursed wood; Empires and kingdoms give away, Their pride before Holy Cross Way...! Good Friday is, yet, not an act, That got ended like a war-pact; Crucifixion is daily fact, You and I merrily enact...! 12 April 2022

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Date: 4/14/2022 11:19:00 PM
My second visit to your poem to read it once again and to congratulate you on your great win, Chris !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/15/2022 12:38:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/14/2022 11:09:00 PM
Wow Christuraj you have brought out the essence of Good Friday in your poem.... Congrats on your win and have a Blessed Good Friday.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/14/2022 11:21:00 PM
Thank you very much. Wish you a fruitful Tritium.
Date: 4/14/2022 1:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Christuraj! "Crucifixion is daily fact, You and I merrily enact...!" - powerful and profound. BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/14/2022 11:17:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/14/2022 1:25:00 PM
Good Friday is indeed a memorial. Congratulations on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/14/2022 11:17:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/13/2022 9:03:00 PM
Yes, Good Friday is good. Perfect submission to the Father's will, allowing resurrection to take place. Thank you for these powerful thoughts.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/13/2022 11:27:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/12/2022 9:08:00 AM
"Crucifixion is daily fact, You and I merrily enact"...! A great conclusion to a great poem ! We keep crucifying Him again and again with no sense of remorse ! Pardon us, Oh Lord !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/12/2022 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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