Debra Squyres Poet Free verse

Good Day

To control these thoughts and write with precision 
With each verse flowing sweetly down the page
Seems an adventure into the unknown world of 
Dictionary tease!!

A daisy chain of words and phrases joined together
in a disjointed series of seemingly nothingness
placed now around the neck of you, dear Souper,
Eyes adorned

Constraints of quiet time and space are often
the culprits of lack of creativities ability to show
verse that makes some kind of sense to some
but not all

That this soul wishes to write beautiful controlled 
poetry is an understatement.  Words spilling now
from mind to fingers in an attempt to simply say
Good Day!!

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Robert Johnson July 5, 2012 at 2:51 PM Good day, bad day, and all the ones between. You never know just what you'll write and what the words will mean. The plinking of the keys begin or the hand begins to write. I guess that's why it's called a gift when words come into sight. I think it's nice, you rack your brain, just trying to say hello. To share with us your kind regards here at the big soup bowl. Soup Mail

Carol Sunshine Brown June 6, 2012 at 12:24 PM When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Debra. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Judy Ball February 22, 2012 at 12:19 PM I agree Deb. We all long to take some words and string them together in a unique way to thrill and inspire other poets. This really says it all. Good Job. God Bless, JB

Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2012 at 7:06 AM Strong women and strong poem - wery good Debra.oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 31, 2012 at 8:33 PM poets are special souls and these lines have captured their essence of creating compositions to share Debra.. lovely write..luv..

Diana-Marie Bombardieri January 31, 2012 at 11:32 AM Great write Debra! So many of us on here can definitely relate. Have a good day:)

Nette Onclaud January 31, 2012 at 9:52 AM this flowing piece makes my day, debra... sunny, beautiful images!.. :) huggs!

Deck Fitzgerald January 30, 2012 at 7:19 PM Debra this was enjoyable and 1 to pop back and look at again , have a nice day Hugs Declan xx

Kim Merryman January 30, 2012 at 11:48 AM Enjoyed your poem, Debra. I can truly relate to your third stanza. So much busyness and noise makes creativity difficult at times. God Bless. Love, Kim