Sheila Conway Poet Personification

Good Bye My Love

Good Bye My Love

it has been three months now
they tell me it's time to say good bye

i miss you everyday that comes 
and i look to the skies and sigh

i wonder why you had to go 
i feel it was too soon

that day you left me 
it was four hours past noon

my whole world changed that day
my heart you took with you

that something special we always had
especially the way you called me Boo

but never do you leave my memories
or my heart and mind

for the past i need now 
to leave behind so  i say Good Bye my love
forever you will be mine.

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Skat A May 19, 2010 at 7:41 PM A SWEET WRITE, VERY ENJOYABLE

Carol Sunshine Brown May 19, 2010 at 10:36 AM It meant so much to me to read your poetry today Sheila. I hope each day takes you to greater heights in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Travisti Ripley May 19, 2010 at 10:22 AM I really like it but in the second to last line i think if you take out the now it would flow better since you already said now in the line before it. Just a suggestion :) I hope you keep writing your lovely poetry.