Good Bye Jim

What s horrible phone call I got that 
you are no longer living your life.  I 
can't go to pay my respects cause 
only my family and friends knew 
about  our true love.  
. So kind so sweet,  such a great 
listener to my madness..I repeat. 
You clamed a tornado , you 
weathered my stroms, you never 
complained about my ranting. Your 
description of me always sang out 
your lips  Beautiful, lovely, 
interesting your lady. No one knew 
about our love no one could 
understand our laughter. I will miss 
my eturnal life companion. So many 
ugly words to describe my hurt. My 
lost. I choose to remember the 
gentle man that loved me back. Your 
smile your thoughtfulness, your 
sweet thoughts, can't leave out your 
eyes hearts sunsets and sunrise 
pictures only you, my dear love did 
text me. Even though your on your 
own I promise Jim your not alone.
Peace angles surround you my love
I will never forget these years 
together. 
Until we meet again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/21/2014 11:40:00 AM
this is very deep....Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 10:37:00 AM
very nice tribute you have written
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