Good Bye

An evening, set in with slight showers
Trees & branches nodding in sync with nature
Showers pampered and nourished the flowers

People happily hopping in the hardy roads
Feeling free to reach homes within rains
Truly “rain” is a festival of joy indoors

All the days of summer, dry &dry
Showers & rains are cool pack treasures
A relief for intense red rash skin

I witnessed these, from the dentist clinic
As my sister, - a patient in pain &panic
Losing her wisdom tooth to the thunder showers
Saying “Good bye” to her pain in the beautiful rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 12:40 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Anuradha - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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November 5, 2018 at 8:19 AM
Thank you so much for your greetings &wishes
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October 28, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Anuradha. Well done.
Sowmyanarayanan Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:15 PM
Thank you.
Scars Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 11:56 AM
very deep! wonderful poem...Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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October 28, 2018 at 11:29 PM
thank you
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