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An evening, set in with slight showers Trees & branches nodding in sync with nature Showers pampered and nourished the flowers People happily hopping in the hardy roads Feeling free to reach homes within rains Truly “rain” is a festival of joy indoors All the days of summer, dry &dry Showers & rains are cool pack treasures A relief for intense red rash skin I witnessed these, from the dentist clinic As my sister, - a patient in pain &panic Losing her wisdom tooth to the thunder showers Saying “Good bye” to her pain in the beautiful rain

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Date: 11/5/2018 12:40:00 AM
Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in LuLoo's contest, Anuradha - blessings and best wishes - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan
Date: 11/5/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for your greetings &wishes
Date: 10/28/2018 6:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Anuradha. Well done.
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Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan
Date: 10/28/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/28/2018 11:56:00 AM
very deep! wonderful poem...Thank you and congratulations on your placement. -luloo :)
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Anuradha Sowmyanarayanan
Date: 10/28/2018 11:29:00 PM
thank you

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