Good Bye

You and me Was never meant to be Farewell have a nice life You be you and i will be me You come and go Truly u don't know who you are Please don't come back This happens over and over again Enough period end

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/15/2011 8:18:00 AM

morning. ed..this is right to the point and straight from the heart! Call me quirky, ...I love how the title and the final line say everything that is enclosed within the poem..great stuff here. What is the dif between blank verse and free verse...I must read on to find out...thx, Gwendolen

Edward Orozco
Date: 11/15/2011 8:37:00 PM

i really dont know lol i meant to put free verse because im a free verse poet. lol =) thanks for reading my work i really appreciate it.

Dana Smith

Date: 10/6/2011 6:54:00 PM

how sad... I've written enough of these sort of poems as well.. hope things get better if this is personal life influenced... take care.. feel free to message me if you like..