Good Bye

I said those words the other day
The words I said I'd never say

I put them off so long it seems
And now I hear them in my dreams

I never meant to hurt you so
I never thought that you would go

I feel the pain down deep inside
There seems no place where I can hide

That's why I said "Good bye" to you
At last my love I know were through...

recovery from...wordsrhyme

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Isaac Smith

June 14, 2017 at 6:05 AM

Very deep Sharon and every decision is hard no matter what it is but it'll get better.

James Fraser

November 8, 2010 at 12:58 PM

Tough decisions sometimes have to be made Sharon, it's how we recover from them >> James :)

Jancarl Campi

November 5, 2010 at 11:42 AM

These words are so sad. To say goodbye is never easy it is true "parting is such sweet sorrow" Thanks for sharing your work. And thank you for your kinds words on my poem "Country Breakfast" I am pleased that you liked it.

Sherelle Smith

November 5, 2010 at 10:40 AM

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL THE WORDS OF GOODBYE IS NEVER EASY N U NEED TO B SURE THAT'S WAT U WANT

Wilma Neels

November 5, 2010 at 10:37 AM

Hey Sharon, goodbye is never easy. I am at a crossroad now, just not sure what to do. Enlighting piece, thanks for sharing ;) Wilma

John Rhinem

November 4, 2010 at 4:03 PM

Smile ~ "This Is 'A Beautiful Expression' From The Soul 'My Dear, Precious & Priceless Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ I wish to "Thank You" for the com my dear; glad "Your Beauty" chose that poe for, it seems to mean sooo very much...."My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Sharon Ruebel,' Amid The Tender Arms of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

November 4, 2010 at 3:57 PM

Smile ~ So many different types of love; eternal love would seem the one which I myself would consider to be by far the most beautiful, desired & important of all loves & yet, I can feel "Your Beauties" heart speaking amid this moment of closure perhaps upon a love within this passing of tides time which is always somewhat regretful & sad I suppose but, again, no accidents occur within this life my dear; not one.... ~ Cont:)

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