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Good Bye

I wiped the dust from its aged unveiling From a secreted place where it had been carefully placed It seemed inconsequential in its merit or value But I opened to find a priceless, silent, narration of love A wearied ring with a small, flawed single diamond She had worn during 25 years of a tested marriage A picture of her five brothers fishing together when they were young A locket with a missing picture that her mother had given her as a child A small copper penny that was used for wishing Dog tags belonging to her runaway, never to return dog pal Rudy A crushed dried flower with red bow from her high school prom A note from someone named Tom that said "I love you" inside a heart Her father's retirement watch for 33 years of service to the railroad My deceased brother's Cub Scout patch along with his funeral program Ticket stubs to the Empire State Building An ocean treasured seashell bracelet made with string and care A locket of my hair when I was a baby enveloped with her note: "Small treasures that mean so much in one's life Will now mean so much to those that find them. I Love You Always, Mom" October 15, 2019 My Favorite Junkyard Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish

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Date: 11/3/2019 7:48:00 AM
Needed a tissue after this one Lonna and I'm sure many others did as well, yes, small treasures are what we cherish most since they are truly not "small" at all within our hearts.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/3/2019 12:24:00 PM
Tears of love and the joy of remembrance as you so eloquently stated in your masterful poem. Thank you for providing this opportunity. Lonna
Date: 11/2/2019 7:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lonna, in My Favorite Junkyard. Hugs Eve
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/2/2019 8:54:00 PM
Much appreciation Eve. Hugs right back! Lonna
Date: 11/2/2019 4:23:00 PM
what beautiful treasures and your poem is equally as beautiful....i love this...congrats on your win... :)
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/2/2019 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Sandra! So glad you enjoyed. Lonna
Date: 11/2/2019 2:30:00 PM
A very beautiful poem that touches the heart. Congrats on your contest placement. Be blessed ... CayCay
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 11/2/2019 8:57:00 PM
Thanks so very much CayCay. Your comments are much appreciated. Lonna
Date: 10/15/2019 1:26:00 PM
A lovely write...A Mom who loved the mystery...
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/24/2019 1:14:00 AM
Thank you Arturo! Appreciate your comments Lonna

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