Good Boy

Good boy Loves toy Tells truth Talks smooth Big heart Very smart Test mark Top rank As Doc Wise walk His care Nice, fair For poor Fees rare Bright star All roar ********************************************

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2017 2:00:00 PM

Most entertaining Manmath! You are much more talented than I could be at writing this form....I just can't do them at all. Have a wonderful New Year my friend! Blessings, Connie : )

Jan Allison

Date: 7/1/2017 6:11:00 PM

I've just come across these Manmath - I wonder if you forgot to put them in the contest as they definitely weren't on the contest page when i judged it:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2017 6:22:00 PM

Nice one, Manmath. Good to see you try this form.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2017 2:34:00 PM

- Well done, Manmath - Footle looks simple ... but I know it's difficult :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/24/2017 5:14:00 AM

Excellent. Smooth and well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/23/2017 3:51:00 PM

Hello Manmath. I haven't tried this new format yet. I've been seeing it circulate recently. It looks unique. I enjoyed your theme and intake on Good Boy. Thank you for sharing. Well done. If this is for a contest, may I wish you good luck.