Manmath Dalei Poet Footle

Good Boy

Good boy
Loves toy
     
                Tells truth
                Talks smooth

Big heart
Very smart

                  Test mark
                  Top rank

As Doc 
Wise walk

                   His care
                   Nice, fair

For poor
Fees rare

                   Bright star
                   All roar
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Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2017 at 2:00 PM Most entertaining Manmath! You are much more talented than I could be at writing this form....I just can't do them at all. Have a wonderful New Year my friend! Blessings, Connie : )

Jan Allison July 1, 2017 at 6:11 PM I've just come across these Manmath - I wonder if you forgot to put them in the contest as they definitely weren't on the contest page when i judged it:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 17, 2017 at 6:22 PM Nice one, Manmath. Good to see you try this form.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 13, 2017 at 2:34 PM - Well done, Manmath - Footle looks simple ... but I know it's difficult :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam March 24, 2017 at 5:14 AM Excellent. Smooth and well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Lisa Ricci March 23, 2017 at 3:51 PM Hello Manmath. I haven't tried this new format yet. I've been seeing it circulate recently. It looks unique. I enjoyed your theme and intake on Good Boy. Thank you for sharing. Well done. If this is for a contest, may I wish you good luck.