Good Bad Special Me

GOOD

What’s good about me? Nothing
and everything. Nothing because
                     like everyone else I am a sinner;
everything because like some I am saved.
My attempt to do good is nothing at all
                 unless I walk in my Father’s shoes



                           BAD

I can be like a tape on repeat. Can you visualize
the movie reel:                 ‘round and ‘round it goes
flapping in the wind,       like flapjack pajamas,
exposing the               hind quarters to everyone.
— happens when I feel wronged

but sista…oh brother, by the grace of God
     I’m an overcomer


                          SPECIAL

I grin like a Cheshire cat, with my pearly off-whites.

I carry my bible in my heart. Can’t take it away from me.
                    it’s part of me — well Jesus is.

Love my family, like most…
I want the best for them like most…
Like some, their eternity is a grave matter…

I pray without ceasing. For them, you and me


3/9/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/14/2020 6:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! I'm delighted to learn more about you through this revelation of yours written poetically in your awesome style with your spiritual perspective. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2020 7:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Beata! :)
Date: 3/13/2020 9:57:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. "flapjack pajamas, exposing the hind quarter" You reminded me of my husband and my sons at one time or another they did this. Thank you for entering my contest. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/13/2020 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 3/12/2020 8:58:00 AM
A lovely write...you're a child of Justice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2020 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! Bless you!
Date: 3/10/2020 9:00:00 AM
My dearest sister ,you are on the right path and there is no way for you to go astray! Blessings and hugs xxx ( a few more poems and you will be on the 15th position. You very prolific. I cannot keep up with you! Good luck. Hahaha)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/10/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so much. One must stay on one’s toes because anyone could go South. I pray I hold onto my faith, always. Thank you for your kind comment. You are the most honored philosopher on this sight. Love your writing and the lovely flowers you post. Blessings, dear one!
Date: 3/9/2020 9:39:00 PM
Your first line scared the pants off of me, as it was the only one I saw as the poem appeared on my screen... Whew, glad to see that there's some good about you!! Knew there was! Cheers, Kim. :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2020 9:42:00 PM
LOL...keep your pants on! That first line was meant to get your attention. Cheers :)
Date: 3/9/2020 3:28:00 PM
Beautifully done my friend. I am racing back to reread it because I am sure that I missed something and I do not want to.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/9/2020 3:29:00 PM
You are so kind. I love you, my friend...I really do! Have a great day ...Kim
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