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Gone with the wind

Gone with the wind..... When I walk along on the ocean shore my old memories swirling in my mind Recollect my days when I was with you We held our hands and walked together while your head rest on my shoulder While cool sea breeze touches on us While the splashing waves wash our feet While the rushing water roll over the rocks While the fishermen with sail boat fishing in the sea While the ships and trawlers sail in the deep sea While the sea gulls wheeled and shrieked in the sky While the hawks hover on the wind While the sun slowly disappear in the sky On those days everything made me beautiful because you were near to me But today I see everything remains same as it is except your love and soul that's gone with the wind. Your sudden death brought me shock and tears Today, you made me alone and I miss you so much Let me pray for your soul to rest in peace. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 5/13/2016 3:03:00 PM
A lovely and soulful write, Ravi. I pray you find peace in memories and the love that still warms your heart. 7, Sandra
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/18/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much Appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2016 9:19:00 PM
Very sad memories, but I hope you can still find joy and beauty in nature and the things you once shared with her... A tender and heartfelt poem, Ravi. Well written and quite moving.
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:39:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much Appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2016 12:26:00 PM
- So beautiful Ravi, even though it brings sorrow and tears - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend Anne. Very much Appreciated. Hugs and kissesxxxx
Date: 5/12/2016 7:21:00 AM
So sad, Ravi, but there are many lovely memories which will fill part of the big void left by her departure. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:40:00 AM
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Date: 5/12/2016 7:12:00 AM
A soulful write that exalts the one that has departed. Very tenderly romantic and horribly poignant my friend, Ravi! May the good Lord keep her in his embrace! A seven! " Death: A celestial pillow upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come" Demetrios Trifiatis
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/18/2016 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much Appreciated.
Date: 5/12/2016 6:44:00 AM
A heartfelt write Ravi...and you have the cherished memories...best wishes
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