Get Your Premium Membership

Gone With the Wind

He sets out for the station Kitbag on his back Off to war in Afghanistan More than likely won't be back Had a romantic last evening With a gal known many years She gave her body willingly Biting back the engulfing tears She loved this soldier Had done for a long time Knew he was off to fight Needed to relax this very last time He has gone maybe for ever Maybe his child he has left inside Memory of the love she had for him Now "gone with the wind" are the tears she cried. Penned 31May 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/14/2015 8:02:00 PM
Seren, sweet win...Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 5/14/2015 5:40:00 PM
Seren, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
Login to Reply
Date: 5/12/2015 3:06:00 PM
Congrats!!Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 5/10/2015 5:25:00 PM
Girl! You did it again! Congratulations...over and over again
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/10/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thank you Judy, u only see the good ones lol....Seren
Date: 5/10/2015 3:56:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me but I know he rated this poem highly when we started to judge the contest last year:-) He was looking for a remake of the film with a romantic aspect too - great write Seren:-) Hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Roberts Avatar
Seren Roberts
Date: 5/10/2015 8:52:00 PM
Thanks Jan,I hope that Darren wherever he is. Is doing ok. Seren

Book: Reflection on the Important Things