Gone With the Wind

Many proud mountains
Worn to insignificance--
Just gone with the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/14/2015 5:51:00 PM
Mark, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/14/2015 6:37:00 PM
THANKS
Date: 5/10/2015 4:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/11/2015 7:35:00 AM
It was last year Mark - sadly Darren became ill when we started to judge the contest last year... I have put off with the hope he would be back but had to judge it on my own as our PM was expiring and as we haven't written together in 9 months it was not worth renewing until he is back with us once more:-) Hugs jan
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/11/2015 7:10:00 AM
This is a surprise. I don't remembering entering this in anything. Thanks for commenting Jan.
Date: 5/20/2014 10:38:00 AM
Very creative and descriptive work..Unique...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/20/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thankyou. I figured commenting about the book or the movie would be overkilled, so I went for the second thing that came to mind--erosion.
Date: 5/19/2014 9:35:00 AM
I thought first of writing about canyons, though they are more often eroded by water. Spent summer vacations in a small town in southern Utah, near Zion's National Park, Bryce Canyon, and Cedar Breaks. The last two have a lot of wind-sculpted features. Glad you liked this.
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Date: 5/19/2014 7:18:00 AM
- Great haiku, Mark ! - It looks so easy to write haiku poems ... but I know it's hard - Yours is well done !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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