Gone With the Wind

Many proud mountains
Worn to insignificance--
Just gone with the wind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 14, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Mark, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
Halliday Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 6:37 PM
THANKS
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 4:08 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me :-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 7:35 AM
It was last year Mark - sadly Darren became ill when we started to judge the contest last year... I have put off with the hope he would be back but had to judge it on my own as our PM was expiring and as we haven't written together in 9 months it was not worth renewing until he is back with us once more:-) Hugs jan
Halliday Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 7:10 AM
This is a surprise. I don't remembering entering this in anything. Thanks for commenting Jan.
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:38 AM
Very creative and descriptive work..Unique...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
Halliday Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Thankyou. I figured commenting about the book or the movie would be overkilled, so I went for the second thing that came to mind--erosion.
Halliday Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 9:35 AM
I thought first of writing about canyons, though they are more often eroded by water. Spent summer vacations in a small town in southern Utah, near Zion's National Park, Bryce Canyon, and Cedar Breaks. The last two have a lot of wind-sculpted features. Glad you liked this.
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May 19, 2014 at 7:18 AM
- Great haiku, Mark ! - It looks so easy to write haiku poems ... but I know it's hard - Yours is well done !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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