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Gone With the Pie

I caught a glimpse of him by moonlight Gone with the pie the thief in the night Called up a private eye who’s bright To have before the clock strikes midnight My pie returned without a bite Otherwise beware to each and every parasite My next pie will hide a stick of dynamite AP: Honorable Mention 2023, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on November 19, 2018 for contest PUNNY HOLIDAY PIES sponsored by MICHELLE FAULKNER

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Date: 11/20/2018 4:57:00 AM
"the pie returned without a bite" - made me wonder, would we still want to eat it? This was great!
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Date: 11/20/2018 6:43:00 AM
LOL. It's the principle of the thing!
Date: 11/20/2018 4:21:00 AM
My pie returned without a bite/ Otherwise beware to each and every parasite //// nice monorhyming
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Date: 11/20/2018 6:40:00 AM
Thanks, Mahtab. Much appreciated.

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