Gone Spelunking

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I went in not feeling much excitement. Further into the cave I did venture. Claustrophobia robs my enjoyment As I began my scary adventure; Far from ideal stroll out in nature. I vowed "I'm done being a thrill seeker!" As I trailed other spelunkers deeper... Into the cave afraid it might cave in! Luckily, I didn't meet the grim reaper! Try again? Now that's a cardinal sin! Date written: 10/11/2020

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/11/2020 5:48:00 AM

This is a stunning write Edward. Awesome tone. Into my FAVES.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/11/2020 8:02:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much, Vijay!:-) I greatly appreciate the FAV, my friend...

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/11/2020 5:24:00 AM

Very brave to enter in the first place. Being afraid that the cave would cave in...great line, Edward.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/11/2020 5:37:00 AM

Thanks, Jenna:-) The last thing you wanna do when you're claustrophobic, lol. It's been over two decades and I still laugh when I look back wondering "how in the world did you get talked into doing that!?" Crazy.