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Gone Into Recluse

Alone just by myself on a sun-dappled lane wary step after wary step is a serene pathway my heart follows to an austere isolation where darker shadows reign into the woods alone. ~07/04/17 ~3. Recluse "R" contest by Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2017 4:26:00 PM

Abdul. I thought yours was one of the best on the list . Also, I have not yet seen anyone else using Rictameter as you did. Congrats on the winners' list.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2017 12:12:00 PM

I really like how you did yours using the rictameter style, Abdul. I like the word you chose to use also.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2017 3:06:00 PM

I love the imagery, you have painted a perfect scene of solitude Abdul:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx