Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Rictameter

Gone Into Recluse

Alone
just by myself
on a sun-dappled lane
wary step after wary step
is a serene pathway my heart follows
to an austere isolation
where darker shadows reign
into the woods
alone.


~07/04/17
~3. Recluse  "R" contest by Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2017 at 4:26 PM Abdul. I thought yours was one of the best on the list . Also, I have not yet seen anyone else using Rictameter as you did. Congrats on the winners' list.

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2017 at 12:12 PM I really like how you did yours using the rictameter style, Abdul. I like the word you chose to use also.

Jan Allison July 4, 2017 at 3:06 PM I love the imagery, you have painted a perfect scene of solitude Abdul:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx