Gone Green

On screen
My spleen

Gangrene
Gone green

I died
Wife cried

Doc sighed
He'd tried

News clip
Now RIP
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Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 7:25 AM
I giggled at this one gw :)) laf
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 9:03 AM
I agree with Rama a great footle sequel, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Perhaps this footle sequel has no equal -- That's cuz it uses real sugar. lol. Happy weekend, Andrea! :) gw
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 9:51 PM
Great footle.soupmail
Wolf Avatar
January 29, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Thanks, Rama... and I have tweaked the footle a bit, thanks to your fine suggestion. Peace, Gershon
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