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Gone Green

On screen
My spleen

Gangrene
Gone green

I died
Wife cried

Doc sighed
He'd tried

News clip
Now RIP

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/30/2021 7:25:00 AM

I giggled at this one gw :)) laf

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2021 9:03:00 AM

I agree with Rama a great footle sequel, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/29/2021 10:12:00 AM

Perhaps this footle sequel has no equal -- That's cuz it uses real sugar. lol. Happy weekend, Andrea! :) gw

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 1/28/2021 9:51:00 PM

Great footle.soupmail

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/29/2021 6:50:00 AM

Thanks, Rama... and I have tweaked the footle a bit, thanks to your fine suggestion. Peace, Gershon