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Gone Green

On screen My spleen Gangrene Gone green I died Wife cried Doc sighed He'd tried News clip Now RIP

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Date: 1/30/2021 7:25:00 AM
I giggled at this one gw :)) laf
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Date: 1/29/2021 9:03:00 AM
I agree with Rama a great footle sequel, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/29/2021 10:12:00 AM
Perhaps this footle sequel has no equal -- That's cuz it uses real sugar. lol. Happy weekend, Andrea! :) gw
Date: 1/28/2021 9:51:00 PM
Great footle.soupmail
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/29/2021 6:50:00 AM
Thanks, Rama... and I have tweaked the footle a bit, thanks to your fine suggestion. Peace, Gershon

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