Gone Girl

Is it the whiteness of your smile or the twinkle in your eye
The sound of your voice or the cut of your jib
the cloths you wear, or the things you share 
that makes you so precious  

Is it the glint in your eye
The loudness of that  giggle, 
the tears of laughter shared 
that makes you so amusing 

Is it the kindness in your heart 
your gentle soul, and loving touch
the need to help when your family need you most
that makes you so adoring.

it's  the words you speak, of love and life
and the time we spend together 
that helped shape that part of our lives  
but the thing I remember most is your Betrayal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/16/2016 11:02:00 PM
Stephen. Congrats on your great win.... LINDA
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 4/17/2016 2:48:00 AM
many thanks pd
Date: 4/13/2016 12:59:00 PM
Stephen, Congrats on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest **SKAT**
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Date: 4/13/2016 3:45:00 PM
many thanks skat , one of my true story ones, sadly, but thanks for picking it cheers :-)
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