gone girl

he knew she was leaving
the signs were there
easy to see after the fact
he stared into the roving waves
knowing he deserved to be alone
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Bell Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 9:33 AM
At some point, the penny drops. Where does he go from here?
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October 23, 2024 at 11:51 PM
unsure Paul, truly unsure
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