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Gone But Not Forgotten

Trills tumble through an air long silenced
warbled melodies enlighten the palate 
whistles delight but fly off to the thistle
freighted by the frigid speak  
amongst the downturn of the day
where blue skies lost their way

Memories of warm caresses
sing along in forgotten dreams
eclipsed heat of destiny
dealt away behind a curtain
draping naked rays of beauty
relegated to shroud in faded grey

Faint knocks of glory soon heard
where smiles seep in secret
gone but not forgotten
under blankets of hope
a moon struck douse of patience 
left to awaken another day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/5/2017 9:37:00 AM
SUPERB POEM, LAST STANZA IS SOLID GOLD IN MY BOOK!A7
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Date: 12/31/2016 11:15:00 AM
Well written Tim. Congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 12/28/2016 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations Tim!!! Well written and well done!! Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 12/28/2016 6:45:00 AM
A masterpiece of a poem, so engaging. Congrats!
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Date: 12/28/2016 6:27:00 AM
Wonderful personification. I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/28/2016 12:42:00 AM
This is very lovely congratulations on your win :) Don't forget to eat those blackeyed peas for the New Year Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/27/2016 9:06:00 PM
Really liked what you did here Tim, congrats.
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Date: 12/14/2016 9:20:00 PM
This goes so well with the previous poem! I think some poems are more powerful for lack of a better word when read as a "series" if that makes any sense! Another great write!
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Date: 12/14/2016 2:08:00 PM
The title in itself is beautiful and the poem even more...Nostalgic..sentimental..romantic..and A wowzer..A fave.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 2:14:00 PM
I need the sun to warm my face...welcome back Charma and Thank you : )
Date: 12/14/2016 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations Tim...
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:25:00 AM
Did I win something? Hope its a trip to the tropics
Date: 12/14/2016 2:57:00 AM
This speaks to me on so many levels... Direct, indirect. It reads and tells, and underneath it speaks of longing. A 7 and a fave
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much Darren
Date: 12/13/2016 4:44:00 PM
This was a defining piece that speaks loudly of your talent my friend. Absolutely beautiful though the missing and the longing to revisit the one who created these memories is felt.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:17:00 AM
The longing days of winter are upon us.
Date: 12/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
This is so nice Tim! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi
Date: 12/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
So beautiful, Tim, just getting better and better!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 12/13/2016 1:55:00 PM
You are such a great writer, Tim. This is simply beautiful poetry!
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/13/2016 2:08:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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