Randy Steele Poet Other

Gone But Not Forgotten

Unmindful time sneaks past
the stage of perfect life.
Quick as dreams take their place
nostalgia clings tight.
     Embrace fun,
     run the course,
     laugh a ton.
     None fathom
     when it's done.

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Suzette Richards September 30, 2025 at 11:14 PM Congratulations, Randy. The words of wisdom and introspection woven into this demanding tight write, takes skill. The quatrain sets the stage for the pivotal view in the pirouette - nice touch. Randy Steele October 1, 2025 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Suzette. Appreciate your comments and support.

Kim Rodrigues September 30, 2025 at 5:45 PM I enjoyed this very much, Randy! Congratulations on your win! Randy Steele October 1, 2025 at 7:22 AM Thank you, Kim.

CayCay Godwin September 30, 2025 at 5:24 PM I like your content very much. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Randy Steele October 1, 2025 at 7:21 AM Thank you, CayCay.

Jeanette Swan September 24, 2025 at 4:33 AM Just had a go writing one of these. it was hard. I like your pirouette! Being in the moment beats dreams and nostalgia. Nicely done. J :) Randy Steele September 24, 2025 at 10:21 AM Thank you, Jeanette. This was my first pirouette. A bit of a tricky form to write.