Gone Away

I lived spring with my destiny
We walked together in the road of,
Small peach blossoms tickled by morning breeze
Jasmine flowers were floating along crystal waters
Shy birds were tweeting in the branches
We slept under the sky guarded by twinkle stars
I woke up a day and i found him away,
He took  with him my dreams and my hope away
Winter laid its shadows of cold in my heart,
 Before spreading its flakes on earth
Sadness grew with seconds…
Tears shed with years…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
December 23, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
poemtheart Avatar
January 1, 2020 at 12:04 AM
You have an incredible mind, Yue. Such beautiful work.. kepp writing & sharing :)
A  Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Nadi, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:22 AM
awesome poem. LINDA
Elkhiam Avatar
November 7, 2015 at 9:36 AM
I like it
A  Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 9:07 AM
Nadia, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
Rabehi Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:32 PM
SKAT.A thx lot i appreciate it lot^^!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 8:43 AM
Thanks for visiting me. I enjoyed rereading this one.
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 12:57 PM
- A touching and lovely poem Nadia !! - I wish you a romantic Valentine day and a beautiful weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rabehi Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:20 PM
'm really honored that u liked my humble words,thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:16 PM
This is really really good, I am surprised I am the first to leave a comment. Well done!
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