Charmaine Chircop Poet Free verse

Gone

I' ll be watching over you even when I'm gone

these eyes will always find you in forevermore.

Somehow I will protect us , a sand-wish far away

 Paper lanterns light up shadows from yester'yesterdays..

A petal in a meadow, fresh dew behind the wall

Emotion penned on tree-trunk, a cascading waterfall.

One million broken pieces, a fading smile once whole

A trickling bleeding feeling, my  hand upon your soul.

Still there though I'm not with you in every waking thought

Still here though you're not with me in moon's glow whisper caught.

A journey on short life-lines ,One road,two separate paths

Smudged ink upon last chapters  as dusk pours on scarlet hearts


This poem was inspired by a sad  love song..'All I Ask -By Adele'

Its just words,and fiction..

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Afolabi Muideen October 2, 2016 at 9:45 AM You have penned a great poem, my friend. Thanks for sharing.........A.M.

Richard Lamoureux October 1, 2016 at 8:50 AM I enjoyed this melancholy piece. As always your words are eloquent. Hugs Rick. Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2016 at 6:35 AM Way too kind Richard..Thankyou :)

Arthur Vaso October 1, 2016 at 1:03 AM So lovely when a song inspires such prose and deep thoughts, beautiful! Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2016 at 6:36 AM I really love Adele's songs and find them very inspiring,especially melancholic ones.Thanks Arthur.

CayCay Godwin September 30, 2016 at 9:13 PM It may be fiction but it is not just words, it is emotional enough to be convincingly legitimate sincerity. I was way touched and moved by your words. Strong feelings laid out optimistically tender ... CayCay Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2016 at 6:37 AM Thanks dear Cay Cay ..Nice to meet you.: )

Paul Callus September 30, 2016 at 3:50 PM How beautiful, Charm....yet how sad to walk two separate paths, as dusk pours on scarlet hearts! Full marks to you! ~ Regards // paul Charmaine Chircop October 2, 2016 at 6:34 AM Thanks Paul.I will pass my regards to hubby..Hope to see you and lovely Sheila..when we have some free time..: )

Jan Allison September 30, 2016 at 12:38 PM oh so beautiful but sad Charma:-) hugs Jan xx Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2016 at 12:45 PM Thanks Jan..: )..Glad you like it.

Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 11:22 AM Sad but beautiful, it seems those go hand in hand often. When one half of a love is taken before the other it is painful but we should remember all the smiles. What song inspired this? Im listening to Wish it would rain down by Phil Collins as the misty rain falls here. Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2016 at 11:40 AM It was Adele...tnks for reading.