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When you come into my life don't judge me because of my past, you don't know how its been a not so easy task. You scream, you holler and are so quick to say goodbye, until you see a single tear falling from my eye. You then want to make up for all the horrible things you said, when you start to realize that my soul is already dead. You beg and you plead because this wasn't supposed to happen, But in that same moment you know that I will never be forgotten. So please take me now and lay me down to rest, For I will be in Heaven watching over you and trying my very best, to be there when you call me and when you need me the most, but just remember I can't be there all the time i am now only a ghost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/12/2016 3:06:00 PM
I especially love the first lines Mindy great first post:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:16:00 AM
Hey Mindy :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:07:00 AM
Mindy Rush, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/24/2016 6:15:00 PM
Mindy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/24/2016 5:48:00 PM
Great poem and analogies!! Thank you for sharing. Xx
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