Gone

Gone
After your last breath I was defeated,
Body, soul and spirit taken down.
Caressing memories became my new world,
Drowning in the past was solid ground.
Everything you did from start to finish,
Following me in my dreams so clear.
Great to know the time we had together
Harboured solace in my heart, sweet dear.
Innocence; the name of our beginning,
Joined as one we never were apart.
Kempt; seemed to be our life together,
Laughter always flowing from the heart.
Moments I shall keep in memories arc.

Nails like daggers pierced the world we started,
Offering us comfort, could no man.
Pain struck from the thought of being parted,
Quietly my darling took a stand.
Right down to the last he did not waver,
Standing tall and giving his vast love.
Tremendous was his courage as he traveled
Under wings of Angels brought above.
Veiled in sadness moving gently forward
Waiting for the sun to drown the rain.
Xanthic was the color of his golden hair
Yearning now to see it once again.
Zaps me at the thought of it my friend.

Written 08.29.2014
Brenda Meier-Hans 
1st
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 5:49 PM
BRENDA, ONCE AGAIN:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Perfect write deserving top place win Brenda! I could feel the sadness within the beautiful words! congrats on huge win!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Thank you for your kind words Dr. Sharma .
May Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Great write...very moving...Congrats on your win
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Joseph.
A   Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Brenda, a nice way in setting a poem, abecedarian style... LINDA
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Thanks Linda.
Haight Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Brenda, such a beautiful but so sad poem. My heart ached as I read your words, and I was so sorry about the sorrow in your heart. Congratulations on 1st place win. Sandra
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 12:13 AM
Thank you Sandra for your kind words.
Hamilton Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:39 PM
a lovely poem Brenda congrats on 1st place ty for your support hugs
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Thanks so much Shadow.
Mehta Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Nice blow and nicely done, Congrats on the win, Brenda
De La Luna Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 3:10 AM
Everything fit so well all together and the flow glides smoothly. A beautiful tribute to a loved-one! Congratulations, Brenda! God bless you!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:52 AM
Love best your first set....:) sweet sad sentiments but the flow really great!! CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2014 at 12:34 AM
Brenda this is truly a wonderful tribute to your late husband, so well written. Congratulations on first place.....Seren
Arowolo Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 11:53 PM
Wonderful and classical piece,Brenda..Congrats on your superb win...
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 8:14 PM
Excellent verse & use of form! Congrad's on your win, proud to share the spot with you. Light & Love
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Thanks so much Debbie.
Mcintosh Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Amazing creativity. Love and prayers, Gina
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 6:43 PM
Thank you Regina
Callus Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 5:25 PM
A beautiful Abecedarian written with ease of thought and flowing words. A fitting tribute to a person who showed courage right up till the end. Congratulations on your top podium finish! // paul
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Thanks so much Paul.
Allison Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:45 PM
Wow Brenda am so pleased to see this at the top of the podium a great tribute to your late husband. Hugs Jan xx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Thanks so much Jan. I am so very happy.
Andresen Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:32 PM
- Brenda, a truly wonderful 1st place - CONGRATULATIONS! (An honor to your loved and missed husband) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 4:57 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise.
Gibson Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations, Brenda, on your top win. Is this reality or fiction?
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:19 PM
Yes Faye I was a widow at 50. It sounds deeper and more poetic then it was in real life. I wrote my poem The Chase to honor my husbands courage as he battled cancer seven years.
Jerden Avatar
September 1, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Good luck in the contest! This is a hard form. Cheers, Roy
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:16 PM
Thank you Roy.
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