Gone

Your warmth, now gone cold I hurt, completely alone You took everything

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 7:09:00 PM

Junior, enjoying this one again, Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2014 6:02:00 PM

Ryan, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/26/2014 4:09:00 PM

Beautiful, sad, inspirational haiku that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/26/2014 4:06:00 PM

Welcome to the PoetrySoup site. Leaving comments on others poems will give them a link to find you. Good writing. There are poets of every sort here.

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/26/2014 8:53:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Ryan. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 5:13:00 PM

Ryan,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Saba Khan

Date: 7/25/2014 10:07:00 AM

A very warm welcome Ryan! Keep going and keep doing the great work like this one..Appreciate the poems written by other poets and they'll appreciate your's :) You're welcome to visit my page anytime :) Good Luck and Have a nice day! :)"

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2014 5:51:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ryan :) - I choose your first sad haiku poem - Well done - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/24/2014 2:43:00 PM

So such a sad haiku. hugs jan xx

Junior Hayes
Date: 7/24/2014 4:20:00 PM

Thanks :/