Gone

Gone- Is the feeling of Love Gone- Is the feeling of Remorse Gone- Is the sense of Responsibility. This is the way we wish to Live. Carefree! Oh! How i wish to live as my peers! Young. Hopeful. Unknowing- That tomorrow it will be gone. Seventeen, and feeling Dead- Within the soul, and through the mind.

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 4:51:00 PM

Remember the adage, time is the greatest healer. We have one life to live and this is not a dress rehearsal like a drama. Live life as it comes to you, Ashley

Ashley Blodgett

Date: 4/6/2011 3:00:00 PM

My poetry is written without thought. These words flow through my fingers as if they are not my own. I look back at them and wonder why I wrote such things. I believe that all of my poems are my subconscious thoughts that are dying to be freed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2011 2:54:00 PM

Sad to have such feelings of depression at such a young age...I hope that just a write and not your life...Sara