Gone

nobody to dream about now that your gone no happy thoughts to set my dreams on no waiting spirit to give my love to no future plans of what we would do my hope was murdered by fate and cause my wishes denighed by one simple clause EVERYTHING i wanted i wanted because of you things i could'nt have but wanted them for you there went my striving my will to live on waking for another day without you in my arms my fairy tale ended as shakepeare's tragities everyday wondering what will become of me i write these words with tears in my eyes my deepest emotions i give with pride the truest love there will ever be is a love that will mourn for thee

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2010 7:41:00 AM

Our hearts ache with you John. I want to give you a big soup hug from all of us. We feel your pain and know you are going through a tough time. Mourning is necessary before you can move on but remember God is with you every step of the way. God Bless Phyl

James Peranteau

Date: 10/22/2010 9:02:00 AM

The lump in my throat gets larger each time I hear your pain dear poet.....God's love with you always...much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2010 6:42:00 AM

You are still grieving for your love...I hope that you heal soon and the pain gets better..That you can remember her without the pain of the loss but with good memories of the things that enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work about Spring Rain.I wanted to feel like it was Spring .I know winter is coming with the cold and the cold wet rains..We don't have much snow here but we did last year.Thanks for your faithfulness in commenting on my work..I appreciate you doing that.Sara

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/19/2010 12:06:00 AM

When we loose someone who means so much its always hard..yet losing someone to God is better than losing someone to the world John,though its hard not to hear her anymore,im sure you can still feel her,and knowing we never die but wake up in a better world brings comfort. .Yes John she's with you. .still is,take care,heartbreaking poem tmfs!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/18/2010 7:36:00 PM

From your heart..the deepest place we live. Do your mourning John..its necessary before you can move on. Thank you for your kind words as well..BG

Jo Bien

Date: 10/18/2010 6:39:00 PM

very well written! thanks for your comments on mine :-) JB

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2010 6:18:00 PM

Hon, it's going to take a long time before you will feel up to making plans for the future again. All you can do now is realize that you will meet again in heaven and, until then, you have to take life one day at a time. Lean on your friends, John. You have many and we love you! Blessings, peace and love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/17/2010 12:44:00 PM

yes, I hear you, I'm sure lots of us feel or have felt this way and it's such a hard road back to the joy that life can be BIG HUGS! Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/17/2010 9:57:00 AM

very touchy and sentimental thoughts you have penned missing someone, John

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/17/2010 6:28:00 AM

Powerful deep write John...very enjoyed.