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Goldfish Drama On Cell Block A

Goldfish drama pitching sassy fit moved to solitary confinement as punishment Inmates in water block laughed Riling up new arrivals Fish who will meet a similar fate By morning Goldfish drama Aquarium guard sighs Feeling sorry for newbies Glad they cannot drop soap Bullying goldfish Running the A block Chasing away softies Or making them into slaves Goldfish misunderstanding Kept in impossibly tight bowl Solitary confinement Not realizing the benefits Contest: GIF With Your Best Anything Sponsor: Wiliam Kekaula Used GIF number 3

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2020 1:27:00 AM

Caren, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/17/2020 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Eve. I had a bunch of fun with this!

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/15/2020 11:42:00 PM

Congratulations on a very well deserved win for an interesting and clever poem. I really enjoyed reading it thank you Caren ...Best Wishes Shirley

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/16/2020 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Shirley. It was fun to write this one!

Hilo Poet

Date: 3/14/2020 4:19:00 PM

Your title alone garners a win--well put, Caren, enjoyed this a whole lot from its start to its clinching end, --this piece is worthy indeed to be in 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/14/2020 8:14:00 PM

Thank you my friend.