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Goldfinch Feather

a goldfinch feather —
the black and yellow foundling
carried by the wind
plucked from a waning winglet
        lad grips flight in his fingers

3/20/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Golden Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 11:08 PM
Indeed, I like this tanka a lot. Well, it possesses superb imagery, voice, and tone! What a joy it is to watch the birds of flight. Keep on sharing. Greg
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March 25, 2021 at 1:00 PM
I do really enjoy seeing these birds. They come by in the spring and again in the fall. They must be migratory in my area. They add so much interest and color to the garden. Great work you have penned. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Tacito Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 9:40 PM
I rarely read poems like this...I'm so glad I did. Striking lines here. So nicely done!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 4:16 AM
Thank you so much!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:48 PM
So delicate and gorgeous Kim. Your art is shining with imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:14 AM
A dainty Tanka. I'm a bit late lately.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:55 PM
I’m just happy to see your reply, my friend! Hugs...K8m
Trifiatis Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:07 AM
Amazing writing, dearest Kim! Stay safe! Hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Thank you! Be safe too, my friend!
Ball Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 7:44 PM
Sweet Kim. I used to see a little boy run by the grooming shop where I worked. He loved feathers and was always excited to find one. Great write. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:54 PM
So glad I paid attention! He brought his souvenir home!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 3:16 PM
This one soars high. What a pretty bird.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Thank you!
Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 10:40 AM
Love this, Kim! A beautiful tanka! Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 5:07 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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