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Golden Torture Looms

Golden torture looms Now the sun sets in the sky It sets also in my heart Oh how I miss you For another day has passed And you are not by my side 8/21/17

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 8/25/2017 5:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike. Love your title!

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2017 6:42:00 PM

Thank you Agnes

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/24/2017 10:21:00 PM

Congratulations Mike, well done...

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/25/2017 7:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/24/2017 5:45:00 PM

Very nice Mike - congratulations! :-)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2017 8:46:00 PM

Thanks so much!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/24/2017 5:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Mike! YAY! Happy Thursday :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 8/24/2017 5:22:00 PM

It is a day by day process. Wonderful words Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/24/2017 8:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Cecelia!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2017 11:43:00 AM

'Golden torture' what a wonderful description of longing for a loved one Mike, I think many can relate to this at different times of their life:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2017 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate you kind words!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2017 11:35:00 AM

Oh Mike, I can feel the longing in this Sedoka. You have expressed it well with your writing! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2017 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Heidi xxxooo