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Golden Torture Looms

Golden torture looms
     Now the sun sets in the sky
It sets also in my heart
Oh how I miss you
     For another day has passed
And you are not by my side


8/21/17

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Agnes Krampe

August 25, 2017 at 5:34 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike. Love your title!

Mike Gentile

August 25, 2017 at 6:42 PM

Thank you Agnes

Charlie Smith

August 24, 2017 at 10:21 PM

Congratulations Mike, well done...

Mike Gentile

August 25, 2017 at 7:46 AM

Thank you so much Charlie!

Gregory Richard Barden

August 24, 2017 at 5:45 PM

Very nice Mike - congratulations! :-)

Mike Gentile

August 24, 2017 at 8:46 PM

Thanks so much!

Heidi Sands

August 24, 2017 at 5:33 PM

Congratulations on your win Mike! YAY! Happy Thursday :)

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

August 24, 2017 at 5:22 PM

It is a day by day process. Wonderful words Mike.

Mike Gentile

August 24, 2017 at 8:47 PM

Thank you so much Cecelia!

Jan Allison

August 21, 2017 at 11:43 AM

'Golden torture' what a wonderful description of longing for a loved one Mike, I think many can relate to this at different times of their life:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

August 21, 2017 at 11:44 AM

Thanks Jan, I appreciate you kind words!