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Golden Time

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Golden leaves upon the pear trees No fruit to ripen though Spring's frost killed it all in the bud Always hope for next year's to grow The air is damp and cool again Charcoal gray clouds move in There's a tet-a-tee between fall And winter to begin We never know about the seasons It's unsure just like life Which can zap us with unreason Or blessings flow without strife

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Valsa George

Date: 2/6/2023 9:25:00 PM

Just like life, seasons too have become so unpredictable. Sometimes the summer turns unusually warm and sometimes the rainy season so damp and flooding with rain pouring down day and night. In our place summer and rainy season are more prominent. Hope next time your pear trees will give you better yield. Beautiful poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/7/2023 4:04:00 AM

Valsa, We ended up having a good crop even though the frost got so many of the early blooms. I was delighted with the outcome. God granted me the energy and ability to put up some pear preserves plus some pear pickles. Your visits always add so much to my page. Sara

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/30/2017 7:46:00 AM

such a great write indeed so true thank you for sharing

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/30/2017 8:25:00 AM

Duncan, Your comments are appreciated..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2017 11:26:00 PM

Nice one, Sara. I hope you are feeling well right before Thanksgiving!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2017 6:51:00 AM

Andrea, Thanks for dropping by..I was sick part of two weeks but I think that I am over that one..It was something that was going around down here I guess..It could have been just my body but it has cleared up..I hope that your Thanksgiving Holiday is an awesome one.Sara

Leon Enriquez

Date: 11/14/2017 9:55:00 AM

Dear Sara: This tells of life's transience. I like these simple strains. Leon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2017 3:03:00 PM

Leon, Your presence at my page is uplifting..Life is surely unpredictable..Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/12/2017 1:46:00 PM

You know it...Anything is possible...I enjoyed this one...Lovely Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2017 3:03:00 PM

Arturo, Thanks for the kind review and encouraging words..Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/12/2017 12:54:00 PM

Sweet poem, Sara! with hearfelt contemplation

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2017 3:02:00 PM

James, Good to see you back..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/12/2017 12:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Sara... In particular the second stanza..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2017 3:02:00 PM

Glad that you liked the second stanza..Sara

Vermillion Scythe

Date: 11/12/2017 9:50:00 AM

I like this poem. Well written. Keep it up.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2017 3:00:00 PM

Vermillion, Thanks for the visit to my p age..It is good to know that you like this one..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2017 8:52:00 AM

- I find autumn sad ... all the beauty die ... but, the colors are beautiful ... before they blow away ... "just like life" - Lovely golden poem, Sara - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/12/2017 8:39:00 AM

So true--lovely seasonal imagery intertwined with seasons of life!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2017 1:52:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by..The seasons of life are as varied as the seasons of the year..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2017 8:16:00 AM

I usually see all the blessing that life bestows upon us...even when it is summer time...I try to find the best in it, but alas it is almost winter and the chilly air is blowing upon us and I am in love with this weather at this time...the clouds that bear the name of shadow, brings to me an emotion like no other, a peace that is indescribable, a wonderful feeling of the greyness brings to me a joy that others fail to see! I enjoy the cloudy days, there is something in the air then, Great work!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2017 1:50:00 PM

Good that you enjoy life no matter the season..Sometimes the heat of summer is hard to bear but I thank God for AC..It is so different from when we had to suffer it out through June,July,August,September and some of October..Sara