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Golden Ticket To My Desire Factory

Let me tilt my top hat, And put on a smile, Let me courtesy and bow... “Name’s Charlie” “Welcome to my desire factory!” Let your own mind illuminate Rest of the journey, Chocolates are obsolete, My factory now reads Your deepest desires! So what you wish is what you get, So follow the purple road, Through pink fountains, Dotted along by red plantains, Those dwarfs in green point the way, To destination ‘sanctum ignorum’! Here you will find a masterpiece. A decorated mirror gilded in gold, There are no machines or gadgets! just that mirror, that makes whatever is your deepest desire! If you are bereft of reason, slave to desires, guided by ignorance, deaf to wisdom, blinded by greed, my mirror will give you all you need! Stand in front of the mirror, just wish! From your dream car to a tasty dish, Clap your hand,reach out to touch, All worldly objects will materialise, Take your stuff and pay at the gate! Our currency? please note: is no longer money!!! But we only charge you that you may no longer need for your worldly deeds. Pay us in morals, it is well valued, if you have saved any, You can also exchange your compassion and love! special offer today for a kind heart, just leave it at the gate and pick up Your want! This strange world feeds our new factory, where we simply collect your innate sweetness, And give you what you greed! “Let me Welcome you all to the new Willy Wonka factory!!” Written 18/05/2020 Sponsor Caren Krutsinger 1st placement Contest: Willy Wonka Is Not Here so what’s my factory going to make?

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Date: 6/5/2020 10:29:00 AM
So glad I got to read this one. There are lots of layers to your factory. Congrats on your high placement.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/5/2020 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Richard! Happy to be amongst the top winners. Loved your souls factory too!
Date: 6/4/2020 3:50:00 AM
I knew this would be on the podium :) Back to congratulate you on your splendid win Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/4/2020 7:54:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. Happy to be appreciated and a win is a good way to be appreciated. Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 6/2/2020 4:40:00 PM
not a factory i want to be visiting any time soon, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/4/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Jan! No you must visit the factory! We have some great offers!!:)
Date: 5/19/2020 6:45:00 AM
Amazing..I loved your poem sir.:-) A strong piece dedicated to our selfish world. But don't mistake me. If your ready to lend .. I too want to own your mirror for just one day and fulfill certain desires and honestly will return you back without any greed.:-D All the best for your win in the contest. Take care~ with regards Deepa.:-)
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V. Deepa
Date: 5/19/2020 11:06:00 AM
Ha ha..:-D so kind of you. Okay sir will try my best and definitely win the golden ticket.Thankyou.:-)Take care
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 7:07:00 AM
Hi Deepa Thanks for your kind words and feedback. You are most welcome to use the mirror but you have to win a golden ticket first, which you may get when you do your next good deed. :) Best wishes
Date: 5/18/2020 10:45:00 PM
Wow! You have dived into the realms of this world with your creative take and metaphors that reflect what humans are ready to give for pleasure. This is wonderfully done Krish :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 1:59:00 AM
Thanks Aditi. Always lovely to hear your views and pleased you like this. Have been working long hours weekend and did not know if I had the capacity to write. This just came out inspired by Gene Wilder’s soul!
Date: 5/18/2020 8:32:00 PM
What biting satirical gem, Krish. Greed is the name of the game in the Trump era (although he is merely a reflection of the problem. Superb! :) gw
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Gershon! It is so hard for people to see the reality, confused by media and victimised by the politicians!
Date: 5/18/2020 7:59:00 PM
Spooky and deeply saddening. God bless you dear friend. .. Love to you, Gina
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/19/2020 1:53:00 AM
Thanks Gina, sadly the world we live in today, where Satan rules through those in power!

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