Golden Threads

Across the sky, like arrowheads, from silhouettes against the red, the call of wild geese swiftly fades into the sun. And then sun bades a sad farewell to one last strand of summer's thread
~~ ~~ For Nette's Contest: "Reflections of a Florette" By Carrie Richards 9/4/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:31 PM
What a beautiful vivid picture you have painted here Carrie. Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 10:17 PM
fascinating shift from the presence of a season to its farewell, carrie.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and huggs
Lawless Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Carrie, this is a wonderfully picturesque poem. It is an awesome sight, watching the geese, in formation, slowly disappear along with the sun.
Callus Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 3:14 AM
Hi Carrie! Love your take on this theme; you never fail to deliver! Beautiful! Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 1:11 AM
Brilliantly unique Carrie! U hv a golden pen! Congrats on big win!
Mehta Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Congrats on a fine win, Carrie
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM
totally unique take on the theme - simply stunning! many congrats hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Beautiful poem Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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