Jeanne Mcgee Poet Rhyme

Golden Threads

Then you caught her in her spiral 
                                        as she hit the ground

     Scraped knees and bruised mind 
careening

          Your kisses healed her broken spirit,
                                                lifted her around

     Your love weaved golden threads 
gleaming


9-27-2020
Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
Gregory Barden sponsor

4 lines from "Beautiful Sadness"  7-16-19

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Gershon Wolf September 28, 2020 at 7:29 PM That last line is truly moving. Good luck in the contest, Jeanne! Joy and Light, Gershon

Constance La France September 28, 2020 at 9:21 AM Jeanne, beautiful lines you have chosen for the contest _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2020 at 1:32 AM - Lovely written, Jeanne ... especially like the last line :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 27, 2020 at 12:11 PM So lovely and uplifting and I like your formatting jeanne:-) Hugs Jan xx Jeanne Mcgee September 27, 2020 at 6:55 PM Hi Jan, thanks for saying that...it is always hard when I try to do Greg's Rithimus...picking out a bit that stands alone and then how to make it seem like it's own poem written in that way? Always a challenge!