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Golden Threads

Then you caught her in her spiral as she hit the ground Scraped knees and bruised mind careening Your kisses healed her broken spirit, lifted her around Your love weaved golden threads gleaming 9-27-2020 Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest Gregory Barden sponsor 4 lines from "Beautiful Sadness" 7-16-19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/28/2020 7:29:00 PM

That last line is truly moving. Good luck in the contest, Jeanne! Joy and Light, Gershon

Constance La France

Date: 9/28/2020 9:21:00 AM

Jeanne, beautiful lines you have chosen for the contest _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/28/2020 1:32:00 AM

- Lovely written, Jeanne ... especially like the last line :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2020 12:11:00 PM

So lovely and uplifting and I like your formatting jeanne:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/27/2020 6:55:00 PM

Hi Jan, thanks for saying that...it is always hard when I try to do Greg's Rithimus...picking out a bit that stands alone and then how to make it seem like it's own poem written in that way? Always a challenge!