Notes About The Poem

This tale is based upon the 
nursery rhyme called, "Rain
on the Green Grass. " Picture
courtesy of Jun at Pixabay

 

Golden Sunshine Rays

It was minty fresh spring and all undulating, grassy hills turned green. Flowers emerged in sweetest perfumes, crowned like beauty queens. It was audacious, ancient April, the month of melodious, ample rain; Of changes here and anywhere, of bold tapping on the windowpane! Lime green dazzled in rich orchard, as fern green graced wild wood. Little Kayla loved vivid, peach sunshine, the kind that makes life good. All had witnessed the fall of the sun, on cherry sunset, night of nights. Later Kayla dreamt of friends coming; like rare purple martin in sight! When winter's ferocious fling ended, forlorn snowman waved goodbye. Then family came in stylish finery, in flip moments of fuchsia butterfly. Kayla lived in the house of sunlit greenery, with plants in every room; As dying sun pledges soon returning colors-laughter from the tomb. In sanguine Mother's scarlet gardens, Kayla played with all her sisters; On the street of songbird scat, of windblown leaves, like hued twisters. Neighbors' porch lights burned all night, under the full moon of nectar; And nightingale songs entered dreams, of the sunny noon of pleasure. 'Gold of Kinabalu' orchids shone with wealth, in days of fancy flowers; As 'black velvet petunias owned the night, after the butterfly encounters. 'Limelight hydrangeas' reveled in stardom, as 'love in a puff' went poof; And chocolate daisies were sinfully sweet, like the invulnerability of truth. Loving apricot sun the way she did, Kayla disliked drenching, silvery rain; So, when it showered after school one day, she dashed down Lilac Lane! She found a refuge, cool and dry, underneath wide, Ada Robinson Bridge; And she waited for a whole hour, then walked home, past blueberry ridge. Rich green was the lush grass, covered in precious pearls, which sparkled; For marigold sun was out once more, lovely as noon eclipse, that darkled. Mulberry trees dripped spring diamonds, as pretty nature flaunted wealth; When blue dragonflies were roaring, and pink butterflies drank to health. Fervent sun shone on the wet roof of Kayla's home, reminiscent of old gold, Just as a sole sighting is more lovely, than all the stories one has been told! 'Rain on the green grass, Rain on the tree, Rain on the housetop, But not on me.'
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Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 10:29 PM
Great use of colors for your imagery, Evelyn and loved the last little rhymed stanza
Buehler Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 3:24 PM
Thanks so much for yor kind thoughts, Andrea. :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 4:39 AM
I liked this one which is laced with color and beauty of nature. The last four lines are especially appealing. Sara K
Buehler Avatar
May 8, 2026 at 7:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara. Your words bring smiles. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 2:31 AM
The arrival of spring highlights blossoming flowers, rich colours like "lime green" and "peach sunshine," and the return of wildlife such as butterflies and songbirds. A beautiful Saturday poem.
Buehler Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:44 PM
Your spirit lifting remarks are so much appreciated, dear Victor. Have a wonderful week. :)
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 7:25 PM
What a sweet and adorable write Evelyn <3
Buehler Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 4:41 PM
Deepest thanks for your kind appreciation, BJ. :) Blessings.
Rolland Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 4:49 PM
beautifully written, and inspiring wishes
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 9:02 AM
May thanks, Yann.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 10:16 AM
I enjoyed reading your very creative write/story. What a great/pretty flower picture you have here. Have a great day writing away...........
Buehler Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 12:01 PM
I appreciate I kind words very much. Have a lovely day. :)
Edmonds  Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 4:21 PM
A lovely story/poem Evelyn, enjoyed the read… Beryl
Buehler Avatar
May 2, 2026 at 11:59 AM
Thank you for the pleasure of your comment. Have a nice day. :)
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