Golden Sight

Elegant yellow,
Outlines the cumolus clouds;
Reflecting below,
Bright as the chrome star,
Glistening off the waters;
As the sun goes down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 11:38 PM
This is beautiful! Your poetry is an open movie! Please keep posting! - eduardo
Moreno Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful image you paint here, a chrome start is a sight to see...Raul
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May 27, 2009 at 6:24 PM
The image you create here reflects the reason poetry is such a pleasure to read, Justin. Seeing this sunset through your eyes is so colorful and rewarding. Great choka! Love, Carolyn
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