Golden Sands

As the stars in the sky
 Come out to play
 And the moon
 Shines down on us
 This tropical shore
 We visit once more
 To stroll hand in hand
 On its golden sands
 Where we first made
 Our wedding plans
 So many years ago
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 5:51 AM
A lovely place with loving memory, a beautiful poem Elizabeth. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Angel-Simon Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Reminiscence of Love... Wish you fruitfulness and freshness of love... Love... Angel
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December 29, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Thank you Angel, love Elizabeth
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Merry Christmas to you as well.
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Richard
Pettit Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 9:23 AM
A nice way to describe a revisiting of a favorite place.
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 12:46 PM
Hi Robert, long time no see :) glad you like my poem, It started with two words, Golden sands and just fell into place from there, yes I'm sure a lot of people will view it in different ways, wishing you a very Happy Christmas, love Elizabeth
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December 23, 2012 at 2:52 AM
such a wonderful, and delightful poem, Elizabeth..most of the sands i walked where in New Zealand, yet the sentiment of your poem, is global.. have a wonderful festive season...
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Thank you Harry, Have a wonderful Christmas, love Elizabeth
Duncan Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 2:46 PM
Love this,,,,, I have written many in this fashion ;} You have a very Merry Christmas ;}
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 3:38 PM
Merry Christmas to you too Debbie, love Elizabeth
Esquire Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 10:30 AM
Dear Elizabeth, May I offer my sincere Congratulations on YOUR Glorious Years of Marriage. A fond remembrance of YOUR LOVE Superb LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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December 22, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Thank you Harry, but this is not about me, I have in fact spent most of my glorious years, seperated and quite happy :) love Elizabeth
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December 21, 2012 at 9:24 PM
Elizabeth , stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
O'Driscoll Avatar
December 22, 2012 at 4:55 AM
Thank you PD, Merry Christmas and a very happy new year to you, love Elizabeth
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 6:17 PM
Reminds me of the Sands of Nuevo Vallarta. I met my sweetie in Mexico and have had the best 21 years of my life. Loved your Poem Elizabeth.
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December 22, 2012 at 4:53 AM
Thank you Richard, Merry Christmas to you and Family, love Elizabeth
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December 21, 2012 at 6:55 AM
sweet one Elizabeth love xx
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December 21, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Mandy, love to you too xx
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