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unrhymed quatrains 

Golden Reflections Fall

I feel from the sting of your tale 
tasting salt of an oceans breeze
burning under the embers 
within a setting sun

Now entering one twilight zone
where all wavelengths are held inside light 
slowly diminishing visions fade 
as the darkness slowly invades

Sounds of the night called under a velvet curtain 
where shadows begin their dance with the moonlight 
faraway stars you cast your gaze upon us 
incinerating blue blazes beholding
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Loughman Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Liam, Your pen danced golden under this velvet curtain ...well done! An excellent write..Have a wonderful week and Christmas:-) Donna
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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